MUGS!!!

Very good animation and use of sprites. The one thing that bugged me were your abundant MUGS errors. You have so many that that was all I ended up thinking about; what would your next error be? Please have someone who is good at writing read through your script so they can correct it before it is posted to your Flash, or have more VA's do it (same Habook2 you casted for part 3).

So...

So... how long are you suspended for with the suicide thing?

Pretty good...

Good animation, however the story was stupid. Make another flash with a better idea and better animation.

Good work.

You did really good work in this song. I enjoyed listening to it.

That said, you need to be careful about dissonance -- where it may be part of your message, it isn't enjoyable to the listener -- I would have used just a diminished chord to get across the same emotions.

Good theme, but it gets to be repetitive. Vary on it.

Real potential. Good work again, and well pulled off. You will do well.

Harsh dynamic changes, but overall great.

There was only one point in this song where I winced; towards the end, there is a very harsh dynamic change that should have been more of a diminuendo. Overall, though, great. Had I been working on a soundtrack for a colonial-time war movie, you would have gotten an email from me immediately asking your permission to use it. Great work!