Good work.
You did really good work in this song. I enjoyed listening to it.
That said, you need to be careful about dissonance -- where it may be part of your message, it isn't enjoyable to the listener -- I would have used just a diminished chord to get across the same emotions.
Good theme, but it gets to be repetitive. Vary on it.
Real potential. Good work again, and well pulled off. You will do well.
Harsh dynamic changes, but overall great.
There was only one point in this song where I winced; towards the end, there is a very harsh dynamic change that should have been more of a diminuendo. Overall, though, great. Had I been working on a soundtrack for a colonial-time war movie, you would have gotten an email from me immediately asking your permission to use it. Great work!
oh habook... u discovered my secret... that stupid ending. And wouldn't you believe it... there was no way to fix it without rewriting the entire song... simply because my tempo went outta wack on my keyboard. No biggie... I can just say I did it on purpose for dramatic reasons :P. Hopefully someone will use this... I'm quite proud of it. Thanks for the review. Hope I get more from yah. :)
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